I know places far away
With bluer skies and stronger winds
Where sun was up for warming hearts
Far from hatred, far from lie
Where colors were so bright
I know places far away
Far away from all those class
With a prayer and a bless
I know places far away
Where the only fun was running
Running through the thickening forest
Where the only fear was losing
Losing butterflies that I chased
Echoes between the mountains
With hazes blowing kisses
Fields of roses, fields of wishes
Innocent senses and happy faces
I know places far away
Far away from any sorrow
Far away from any horror
Safer and sounder places I know
Places on a farthest distance
That I couldn't run away from
And I Never felt of any guilt
When I picked up those daisies
Never seen I any dream
Powerful than one I dreamed
The one I dreamed on those places
Places that are far away
Places taught me how to breathe
Places hugged me with a heartfelt kindness
I know places, and far away..
Far away from this town, this life
Where two big worlds collide
Where love and kindness mattered
No danger ever conquered
Laughters louder than any music
And smells that gently offered me hopes
Hopes for a new day on an old life
Made me fall in love with places..
I know places far away
When the only lesson was how to love
Where the only thing was to care
How can I forget those places?
How can I left behind those graces..
I know places far away
Where strength was all around me
Where bravery was holding me
It was a hidden heaven on a hell
A diamond lost on a corner
It was a treasure lost and forgotten
It was a daydream, a memory..
And It will never be forgotten.
I know places far away
Where I left my soul and heart
Far away from my body and mind
Now I know how magical it was..
To smell the cut grass everyday
Morning rains, thunderstorms and rainbows
How simple it was to embrace
And say goodbye to the lovely sun
Now I know how far it was
To fall asleep when counting stars..
Will be back one day, I promise
To the places I dedicate this
I'll always be faithful to
You have never been to or heard of
'cause they are places far away
I won't tell you how far it is, but
I know those places, and far away..
Don't ask me where it is, cos'
I can't find it on a map
Far away, just far away
Oceans and continents away
I won't tell you where It is cos'
I don't know where I was
It was a daydream that I had
In the middle of my journey
The only sure thing that I know is,
I know places far away..
With bluer skies and stronger winds
Where sun was up for warming hearts
Far from hatred, far from lie
Where colors were so bright
I know places far away
Far away from all those class
With a prayer and a bless
I know places far away
Where the only fun was running
Running through the thickening forest
Where the only fear was losing
Losing butterflies that I chased
Echoes between the mountains
With hazes blowing kisses
Fields of roses, fields of wishes
Innocent senses and happy faces
I know places far away
Far away from any sorrow
Far away from any horror
Safer and sounder places I know
Places on a farthest distance
That I couldn't run away from
And I Never felt of any guilt
When I picked up those daisies
Never seen I any dream
Powerful than one I dreamed
The one I dreamed on those places
Places that are far away
Places taught me how to breathe
Places hugged me with a heartfelt kindness
I know places, and far away..
Far away from this town, this life
Where two big worlds collide
Where love and kindness mattered
No danger ever conquered
Laughters louder than any music
And smells that gently offered me hopes
Hopes for a new day on an old life
Made me fall in love with places..
I know places far away
When the only lesson was how to love
Where the only thing was to care
How can I forget those places?
How can I left behind those graces..
I know places far away
Where strength was all around me
Where bravery was holding me
It was a hidden heaven on a hell
A diamond lost on a corner
It was a treasure lost and forgotten
It was a daydream, a memory..
And It will never be forgotten.
I know places far away
Where I left my soul and heart
Far away from my body and mind
Now I know how magical it was..
To smell the cut grass everyday
Morning rains, thunderstorms and rainbows
How simple it was to embrace
And say goodbye to the lovely sun
Now I know how far it was
To fall asleep when counting stars..
Will be back one day, I promise
To the places I dedicate this
I'll always be faithful to
You have never been to or heard of
'cause they are places far away
I won't tell you how far it is, but
I know those places, and far away..
Don't ask me where it is, cos'
I can't find it on a map
Far away, just far away
Oceans and continents away
I won't tell you where It is cos'
I don't know where I was
It was a daydream that I had
In the middle of my journey
The only sure thing that I know is,
I know places far away..
By Aiden SummerDaisy
Lovely post Aiden!!!
ReplyDeleteI just love poetry and your poem of a quasi Utopian place where you can be who you want to be just sounds lovely.
I love your descriptiveness and I love it how you kept referring back to the main title line "I know places far away"
It really keeps the whole piece together and structured which is excellent!
Keep it up!
Thank you so much Justin:)
ReplyDeleteJust wanted to give it a try, and I'm so happy if you think I did it right :)
Big thanks my dear friend ! :)